Friday, December 23, 2016

Friday, December 23

Short block due to Winter Concert/Reindeer Games schedule.
Collected essays (also OK to submit before midnight through Google Docs).

Watched video shorts by Vlogbrothers Hank and John Green on rants and negative cognitive bias (Logic Fails!)

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, December 23: Essay responding to the 2003 AP prompt due (will count as a ten-point grade).

Thursday, December 22

This lesson taught by Mrs. Bidwell in Ms. Bishop's absence.

Students finished writing the response to the AP argument prompt for 2003.
If time permitted, they shared their responses in their writing groups.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, December 23: Essay responding to the 2003 AP prompt due (will count as a ten-point grade).

Wednesday, December 21

This lesson taught by Mrs. Bidwell in Ms. Bishop's absence.
Students finished writing the response to "Shifting out of Neutral."

Students shared their writing in groups, then self-evaluated using the detailed rubric for AP Argument essays.

Students received and discussed the AP argument prompt for 2003.
Began writing to the prompt as time permitted.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, December 23: Essay responding to the 2003 AP prompt due (will count as a ten-point grade).

Tuesday, December 20, 2016

Tuesday, December 20

Reviewed the prompt, "Reflecting on the points Gold makes in his article 'Shifting out of Neutral,' in your view, where should teachers draw lines around moral judgements when teaching? When should they include or exclude their own opinions? "

Students began work on an argument addressing that prompt.

DUE DATES

TUESDAY, December 20: Revised Rogerian argument is due.

Monday, December 19, 2016

Monday, December 19

Discussed what it means to "interrogate" a text.
Read "Shifting out of Neutral," from Teaching Tolerance.  Students annotated for places they can challenge, support, or connect to the argument.
Groups shared observations on the article--"interrogating the text" together.

Groups reflected on the prompt, "Reflecting on the points Gold makes in his article 'Shifting out of Neutral,' in your view, where should teachers draw lines around moral judgements when teaching? When should they include or exclude their own opinions? "

Shared rubric on evaluating an argument written to an AP prompt.

DUE DATES

TUESDAY, December 20: Revised Rogerian argument is due.

Friday, December 16

Short classes today due to two hour delay schedule.
Vocabulary Quiz.

Close observation, Time Magazine's Person of the Year cover.
Read and discussed Haaretz image analysis article of the photograph.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, December 16: Vocabulary quiz; Blizzard Bags due. Read "Analyzing Visual Texts as Arguments" (131--139).
TUESDAY, December 20: Revised Rogerian argument is due.

Thursday, December 15, 2016

Thursday, December 15

Supportive groups met, shared drafts of Rogerian arguments.
Revision suggestions.

Previewed visual texts to accompany assignment in packet, "Analyzing Visual Texts as Arguments" (131--139).

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, December 16: Vocabulary quiz; Blizzard Bags due. Read "Analyzing Visual Texts as Arguments" (131--139).
TUESDAY, December 20: Revised Rogerian argument is due.

Wednesday, December 14, 2016

Wednesday, December 14

Discussed how, based on reading "Terror's Purse Strings" first and second-hand evidence relates to appeals to reason, authority, and emotion.

Reviewed the essay "Why Can't Environmentalism Be Colorblind?" on page 101 of the packet, analyzing it for the impact of first-hand evidence.  What appeals does this kind of evidence seem to support?

Reviewed the assignment for a Rogerian argument, to draw from last week's opposition argument and incorporate a concession and refutation in a 300--600 word essay.
Rough drafts due to discuss in topic-centered support group tomorrow; final drafts to be due on Tuesday.

Students checked in with groups.

DUE DATES
MONDAY, December 12: Read 111--131 in your Chapter 3 Packet.
THURSDAY, December 15: Rough draft Rogerian argument is due.
FRIDAY, December 16: Advanced Word Power Lesson Five and unit review quiz. Blizzard Bag Lesson #1 Due!
TUESDAY, December 20: Final draft Rogerian argument is due.

Tuesday, December 13, 2016

Tuesday, December 13


No school Monday, December 12 due to snow day. 

Referring to the essay "Terror's Purse Strings" on page 109 of the Chapter 3 packet, groups met to reach consensus on.
  • The purpose/thesis of the essay.
  • Identifying examples of first-hand vs. second hand evidence.
  • Identifying the appeals of each piece of evidence: to pathos, ethos, or logos: emotion, legitimacy/authority of the writer/argument, and logic.
Discussed the essay as a whole class.
HOMEWORK: Review your identifications of evidence in the essay, and amend them as needed. Look them over for any patterns or associations of types of appeals.  

DUE DATES
MONDAY, December 12: Read 111--131 in your Chapter 3 Packet.
FRIDAY, December 16: Advanced Word Power Lesson Five and unit review quiz. Blizzard Bag Lesson #1 Due!

Monday, December 12, 2016

Monday, December 12 Blizzard Bag Lesson #1: Microfiction

In the event of a snow day on Monday, December 12, please complete this lesson at home.  It should take you about 45--50 minutes to complete.

Tansy Undercrypt is a prominent writer of the new genre sometimes known as microfiction.  Your assignment today will be to read and study several pieces of microfiction, create a definition of what microfiction is, and to write a piece of your own to submit for a grade.

Don't be surprised if you find microfiction, and especially Tansy Undercrypt's microfiction, to be completely addicting.  (I do.)


  1. Make your way to Tansy Undercrypt's web page.
  2. Select any six pieces of her work.  (Don't worry--that's less than it sounds like!)
  3. Write a VERY brief summary of each piece that you read. (One sentence should do it.)
  4. Write an original definition of microfiction.  (Don't Google it--I will be checking!  Use your own fine mind on this one.)
  5. Write one piece of microfiction of your very own, and revise it to hand in to me.


You may want to use Google Docs to write your definition and microfiction.  You can then "hand it in" simply by sharing it with me at cbishop@grsd.org.

Your work will be due no later than Friday of this coming week.

Friday, December 9, 2016

Friday, December 9

Groups shared Logical Fallacies posters.  
Selected favorites; put up all posters inside or outside the classrooms.

Supportive issue groups met, shared opposition arguments.
Discussed the process, insights gained.

Reminder: if you haven't yet done so, read and annotate the essay "Terror's Purse Strings" on page 109 of the Chapter 3 packet.

  • Identify the purpose/thesis of the essay.
  • Using two colors of highlighter (or a similar strategy) highlight and identify examples of first-hand vs. second hand evidence.

DUE DATES
MONDAY, December 12: Read 111--131 in your Chapter 3 Packet.
FRIDAY, December 16: Advanced Word Power Lesson Five and unit review quiz.

HOMEWORK FOR MONDAY, December 12

Read pages 111--131 in your Chapter 3 Packet.

REMEMBER: Friday, December 16 will be a Word Power Chapter 5 + Review QUIZ.

Thursday, December 8, 2016

Thursday, December 8

Students worked on their 200--300 word (ie, brief, c. 1 page) opposition argument.

DUE DATES

DUE TOMORROW, FRIDAY
, December 9:

Logical Fallacies poster due (at least 4 fallacies, illustrated with examples from social media).

Opposition argument due.

Read and annotate the essay "Terror's Purse Strings" on page 109 of the Chapter 3 packet.

  • Identify the purpose/thesis of the essay.
  • Using two colors of highlighter (or a similar strategy) highlight and identify examples of first-hand vs. second hand evidence.


NOTE: The opposition argument is DUE at the start of class on Friday: I will be collecting this tomorrow for a score (out of 5 points, for completion and attempt at fairly representing the opposing view).

Wednesday, December 7, 2016

Wednesday, December 7

REMINDER: For Friday, finish Logical Fallacies Posters!
Recap of purpose of acknowledging an opponent's position in persuasive argument.

Read and discussed two sample op-ed pieces, annotating them for places the author acknowledges the opposing view.
Created supportive writer's groups for those who want them for purposes of developing their 200--300 word (ie, brief, c. 1 page) opposition argument.
Groups briefly checked in.

NOTE: For those who will be out tomorrow, the opposition argument is DUE at the start of class on Friday.

DUE DATES

MONDAY, December 5: Glossary of Argument Terms vocabulary quiz.
FRIDAY, December 9: Logical Fallacies poster due (at least 4 fallacies, illustrated with examples from social media).

Tuesday, December 6, 2016

Tuesday, December 6

REMINDER: For Friday, finish Logical Fallacies Posters!
Students wrote preliminary thesis statements for their three "hot button" topics.
Discussed purposes of argument: sometimes to clarify, sometimes to vent... sometimes to persuade.
Discussed role of acknowledging an opponent's position in persuasive argument; Rogerian argument.

Assigned a 200--300 word (ie, brief, c. 1 page) opinion piece taking the opposing view to one of the students three preliminary thesis statements.
Began research and writing.

DUE DATES

MONDAY, December 5: Glossary of Argument Terms vocabulary quiz.
FRIDAY, December 9: Logical Fallacies poster due (at least 4 fallacies, illustrated with examples from social media).

Monday, December 5, 2016

Monday, December 5

HOMEWORK: Choose the three possible topics for argument you feel most passionate about; write them down.
This class short due to late start schedule.
Glossary of Argument Terms vocabulary quiz.

Introduced online resource, Thou Shalt Not Commit Logical Fallacies.
Reviewed logical fallacy activity on page 109.
Groups wrapped up brainstorms on controversial topics.
Presented lists of topics for argument to the class.

DUE DATES

MONDAY, December 5: Glossary of Argument Terms vocabulary quiz.
FRIDAY, December 9: Logical Fallacies poster due (at least 4 fallacies, illustrated with examples from social media).

Friday, December 2

This class taught by a sub in Ms. Bishop's absence.
Watched film version of Nicholas Nickleby.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, December 2: Glossary of Argument Terms vocabulary quiz. POSTPONED due to Ms. Bishop's illness.
MONDAY, December 5: Glossary of Argument Terms vocabulary quiz.
FRIDAY, December 9: Logical Fallacies poster due (at least 4 fallacies, illustrated with examples from social media).

Thursday, December 1, 2016

Thursday, December 1

Assigned Logical Fallacies poster, due Friday, December 9: 4 logical fallacies illustrated with examples from social media.
(Began review of logical fallacies activity on page 109 of the handout, but moved this activity to Friday, after the quiz, to allow students to revise if needed.)

Watched the PBS Idea Channel short, "Five Fallacies" as students took notes.
Reviewed the group annotations on claims within the article "Felons and the Right to Vote."

Groups met to brainstorm lists of controversies for a potential Op-Ed piece.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, December 2: Glossary of Argument Terms vocabulary quiz.

Wednesday, November 30, 2016

Wednesday, November 30

Assigned homework for tomorrow in Chapter 3 handout.

Watched the Monty Python sketch, "The Argument Clinic," discussed actual definition of the term.
Reviewed the terms Claims of Fact, Claims of Value, and Claims of Policy.
Read the New York Times editorial "Felons and the Right to Vote."
Students annotated the editorial for claims of fact, value, and policy.
Groups met and attempted to reach consensus on claims within the article, and to see if there is a pattern in how they are used.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, December 2: Glossary of Argument Terms vocabulary quiz.

HOMEWORK for Thursday, November 30

In your Chapter 3 packet, read pages 92--109, through the first activity.
Do the first activity, identifying logical fallacies.

Tuesday, November 29, 2016

Tuesday, November 29

Reviewed the identifying the arguable activity on page 86.

Groups wrapped up their mini-lessons on articles from The Atlantic and The New Yorker.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, December 2: Glossary of Argument Terms vocabulary quiz.

Monday, November 28, 2016

Monday, November 28

Assigned homework in Chapter 3 handout packet: read pages 81--92 (stop after Quindlen essay). Do the activity on page 86.

Groups began presenting their mini-lessons on articles from The Atlantic and The New Yorker.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, December 2: Glossary of Argument Terms vocabulary quiz.

Wednesday, November 23, 2016

Wednesday, November 23

This class short due to half day schedule.

Folk music as non-fiction: listened to Arlo Guthrie's 1967 performance of "Alice's Restaurant."

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, December 2: Glossary of Argument Terms vocabulary quiz.

Tuesday, November 22, 2016

Tuesday, November 22

Reviewed Part B of the Subjunctive packet.

Groups received copies of the articles they chose from The New Yorker and The Atlantic.
Reviewed and annotated will lead the class in analyzing after the break.
Groups planned their presentations.

Monday, November 21, 2016

Monday, November 21

This class short due to Two Hour Delay schedule.

REMINDER: Part B of the Subjunctive packet will be corrected tomorrow.

Groups chose articles from The New Yorker or The Atlantic to analyze and discuss with the class.


Friday, November 18, 2016

Friday, November 18

HOMEWORK: Do Part B of the Subjunctive packet.

Timed response to the 2016 AP analysis prompt.
COLLECTED essays for a unit test grade.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, November 18: There will be a timed response to an AP analysis prompt.

Thursday, November 17, 2016

Thursday, November 17

HOMEWORK: Do Part B of the Subjunctive packet.

Groups shared essays on the 2007 AP analysis prompt.
Representative essays were shared with the class; groups and class members identified strengths of the essays.

COLLECTED essays.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY, November 18: There will be a timed response to an AP analysis prompt.

Wednesday, November 16, 2016

Wednesday, November 16

Reviewed Part A of the Subjunctive packet.

Read, discussed, and annotated the 2007 AP analysis prompt.
Students began writing responses.  Due tomorrow in class!

DUE DATES

THURSDAY, November 17: Write an analysis essay on the 2007 AP essay and prompt.

Tuesday, November 15, 2016

Tuesday, November 15

Short class due to parent-teacher conferences.

Groups met, scored one another's and their own responses to the 2008 analysis prompt.
Presented selected essays to the class.
COLLECTED  analysis essays on the 2008 AP prompt.

DUE DATES

MONDAY, November 14: Write an analysis essay on the 2008 AP essay and prompt.

Monday, November 14, 2016

Monday, November 14

Short class due to parent-teacher conferences.

Groups met, shared and discussed responses to the 2008 analysis prompt.

DUE DATES

MONDAY, November 14: Write an analysis essay on the 2008 AP essay and prompt.

Friday, November 11

No school due to Veterans' Day.

DUE DATES

MONDAY, November 14: Write an analysis essay on the 2008 AP essay and prompt.

Thursday, November 10, 2016

Thursday, November 10

Guidance presentation on College Week.
Groups met, continued discussing the 2008 analysis prompt.
Students brainstormed with their groups on prewriting to the prompt.

DUE DATES

MONDAY, November 14: Write an analysis essay on the 2008 AP essay and prompt.

Wednesday, November 9, 2016

Wednesday, November 9

Groups shared their representative essay with the class as a whole.
Discussed student essays.
Read and annotated 2008 analysis prompt.
Groups met, began discussing the prompt.

No homework tonight.


Tuesday, November 8, 2016

Tuesday, November 8

Warm up mini lesson on Verbs and Verbals.
Groups met to share their responses to the 2010 AP analysis essay prompt, noting:
  • Does this essay discuss some of the obstacles Banneker faces to his purpose?
  • Does it tie rhetorical strategies to overcoming those obstacles?
  • Is it organized overall?
Groups chose one representative essay to share with the class as a whole.
Individuals scored their own essays, using the AP rubric.

No homework tonight.



Monday, November 7, 2016

Monday, November 7

Returned the re-done AP essays.
Individual students reviewed the 2010 AP analysis essay prompt, noting:

  • What obstacles to his purpose does Banneker face?
  • What strategies seem designed to overcome them?
Groups met to discuss the letter and their observations.
Groups reported to the class as a whole.

HOMEWORK: Keeping in mind our discussion of the letter, write an analysis essay responding to the prompt, due tomorrow at the start of class.


Friday, November 4, 2016

Friday, November 4

COLLECTED revised analysis essay.
Gave informal feedback on the re-done AP essays, shared potential pitfalls in writing I'm seeing in student essays.

Finished watching The King's Speech.

Distributed the 2010 AP analysis essay prompt.
Read aloud, discussed as a whole class confusing passages, unfamiliar vocabulary, and purposes.
Individual students annotated their copies with notes on rhetorical strategies used to develop the argument/support the purposes.

DUE DATES
FRIDAY, November 4: One  is due by the end of the school day.  (Do NOT use Google Docs; hand in a double space essay either hand printed or printed by computer.)

Thursday, November 3, 2016

Thursday, November 3

COLLECTED re-do of Friday's AP analysis prompt.

Continued watching The King's Speech. (Now with -9:53).

DUE DATES
FRIDAY, November 4: One revised analysis essay is due by the end of the school day.  (Do NOT use Google Docs; hand in a double space essay either hand printed or printed by computer.)

Wednesday, November 2, 2016

Wednesday, November 2

Wrapped up discussion of Friday's AP analysis prompt.
Assigned writing a fresh response to the prompt for tonight's homework.  Due Thursday.

Continued watching The King's Speech.


DUE DATES
FRIDAY, November 4: One revised analysis essay is due by the end of the school day.  (Do NOT use Google Docs; hand in a double space essay either hand printed or printed by computer.)

HOMEWORK for Thursday, November 3

Working from a fresh draft (ie, without simply revising your previous answer) respond to the AP Analysis prompt from last Friday.

Do set a timer for 40 minutes--but do not feel obligated to be exact in your timing.

Tuesday, November 1, 2016

Tuesday, November 1

Returned scored AP analysis prompt; we will be postponing beginning the next unit for at least a week to improve performance on analysis essays.

The vocabulary quiz on terms of argument will be postponed at least until Friday, November 11.

Began discussion of purpose and rhetorical strategies in the prompt from Friday; for homework, students should review the essay, highlight any unfamiliar vocabulary, and also note any additional examples of rhetorical strategies they can see now that we have begun to discuss them together.

Continued watching The King's Speech.


DUE DATES
FRIDAY, November 4: One revised analysis essay is due by the end of the school day.  (Do NOT use Google Docs; hand in a double space essay either hand printed or printed by computer.)



Monday, October 31

This lesson taught by a sub in Ms. Bishop's absence.

Began watching The King's Speech.


DUE DATES

FRIDAY,  November 4: Revised analysis essay is due by the end of the school day.  (Do NOT use Google Docs; print or hand write on paper, on every other line.)

Friday, October 28, 2016

Friday, October 28

Introduced new vocabulary unit, on argument terms and fallacies.
Students wrote a timed essay to an AP analysis prompt.
COLLECTED the essays for a score and for a grade.


DUE DATES

FRIDAY,  November 4: Revised analysis essay is due by the end of the school day.  (Do NOT use Google Docs; print or hand write on paper, on every other line.)

Thursday, October 27, 2016

Thursday, October 27

Grammar mini-lesson: Verbs vs. Verbals; Avoiding Passive Voice.

Groups met to share essays and observations on last night's reading assignments.
Shared observations with whole class.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY,  November 4: Revised analysis essay is due by the end of the school day.  (Do NOT use Google Docs; print or hand write on paper, on every other line.)

EARLY DECISION APPLICANTS: Your revision will be prioritized for grading IF you communicate you need this to Ms. Bishop!

Wednesday, October 26, 2016

Wednesday, October 26

Reviewed the homework due tomorrow: reading three assigned essays and creating annotations for them via Post-It notes or graphic organizers, AND writing one 40 minute analysis essay for one of the three essays.

Quick whole-class check in regarding last night's readings; discussed the idea of a central or extended metaphor or symbol within a piece of non-fiction writing.

Groups met to share essays and observations on last night's reading assignments.
Shared observations with whole class.


DUE DATES

FRIDAY,  October 21: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.

EARLY DECISION APPLICANTS: Your revision will be prioritized for grading IF you communicate you need this to Ms. Bishop!

Tuesday, October 25, 2016

HOMEWORK for Thursday, October 27

Read the three essays "I Want a Wife" (344), "Not All Men Are Sly Foxes"(348) and "Our Barbies, Ourselves"(353) in your Bedford Reader.
Also:

  • Annotate each essay with Post-it notes and/or complete a graphic organizer.
  • Choose one essay.  In about 40 minutes, write an essay in which you analyze the rhetorical strategies the author uses to develop their position and/or support their purpose for the  essay.

Tuesday, October 25

Reviewed the homework due tomorrow: reading three assigned essays and creating annotations for them via Post-It notes or graphic organizers, AND writing one 40 minute analysis essay for one of the three essays.

Quick whole-class check in regarding last night's readings.

Groups met to share essays and observations on last night's reading assignments.
Groups selected one essay to share with the class; whole class listened and responded to shared essays.


DUE DATES

FRIDAY,  October 21: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.

EARLY DECISION APPLICANTS: Your revision will be prioritized for grading IF you communicate you need this to Ms. Bishop!

HOMEWORK for Wednesday, October 26

Read the three essays "Arm Wrestling with My Father" (144), "Shooting Dad" (152) and "Silent Dancing" (163) in your Bedford Reader.
Also:

  • Annotate each essay with Post-it notes and/or complete a graphic organizer.
  • Choose one essay.  In about 40 minutes, write an essay in which you analyze the rhetorical strategies the author uses to develop their position and/or support their purpose for the  essay.

Monday, October 24, 2016

Monday, October 24

Reviewed the homework due tomorrow: reading three assigned essays and creating annotations for them via Post-It notes or graphic organizers, AND writing one 40 minute analysis essay for one of the three essays.

Shared the October 10 New Yorker cover "Miss Congeniality."  Discussed what we were able to observe in the image, and what the image communicated to us through its details.

Students wrote paragraphs analyzing the image we had discussed.

Groups met to discuss and analyze another New Yorker cover (one per group).
Shared observations with the class.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY,  October 21: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.

EARLY DECISION APPLICANTS: Your revision will be prioritized for grading IF you communicate you need this to Ms. Bishop!

HOMEWORK for Tuesday, October 25

Read the three essays "Videotape" (466), "The Capricious Camera" (359) and "Orientation" (324) in your Bedford Reader.
Also:

  • Annotate each essay with Post-it notes and/or complete a graphic organizer.
  • Choose one essay.  In about 40 minutes, write an essay in which you analyze the rhetorical strategies the author uses to develop their position and/or support their purpose for the  essay.

Friday, October 21, 2016

Friday, October 21

NO HOMEWORK OVER THE WEEKEND.
Reminder: Final draft essays are due by midnight tonight; you must RESHARE them with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs for them to be counted as handed in.

Returned scored analysis essays handed in yesterday, and shared Considerations for Writing an Analysis Essay and What Are Rhetorical Strategies, notes derived from  Ms. Bishop's observations of what is missing from the essays so far.
Groups met to share their analysis essays and observations on last night's assigned homework with one another, giving and receiving feedback on how well it accomplished the task.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY,  October 21: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

What Are "Rhetorical Strategies"?

The task of an analysis essay is going to be some variation on analyzing the effects of a rhetorical strategy on developing an argument or supporting a purpose.

BUT WHAT ARE "RHETORICAL STRATEGIES"?  
Look for:

  • Imagery (often used to evoke emotions)
  • Diction (aka word choices)
  • Syntax (how sentences are structured.  See your Glossary of Style Elements vocabulary for specifics)
  • Rhetorical appeals:
  • To reason and logic (logos)
  • To emotion and humor (pathos)
  • To character/trustworthiness of the speaker (ethos)
In your analysis essays, look for strategies, and write about their impact on the reader, and how that impact serves the purpose of the essay.


Strategy > Effects > Purpose.
Strategy > Effects > Purpose.
Strategy > Effects > Purpose.
Strategy > Effects > Purpose!

Thursday, October 20, 2016

Considerations for Writing an Analysis Essay


  • Identify PURPOSE early and clearly.
  • Describe TONE using adjectives (usually relating to emotion: how much and what sort).
  • Give examples, but link them clearly to a specific rhetorical strategy.
  • Analyze, don't evaluate.
  • Don't just summarize--connect the dots!

Remember that the task is to identify what rhetorical strategies are being used to create what effects in readers (often through TONE), and to explain how they support the purpose.

Thursday, October 20

Reviewed the homework due tomorrow: reading three assigned essays and creating annotations for them via Post-It notes or graphic organizers, AND writing one 40 minute analysis essay for one of the three essays.

Groups met to share observations from last night's essays, referring to graphic organizers and/or annotations.
Groups shared their analysis essays with one another, giving and receiving feedback on how well it accomplished the task.

COLLECTED one essay, from today or yesterday, to return with an AP score and a homework grade tomorrow.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY,  October 21: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

Thursday, October 20

Reviewed the homework due tomorrow: reading three assigned essays and creating annotations for them via Post-It notes or graphic organizers, AND writing one 40 minute analysis essay for one of the three essays.

Groups met to share observations from last night's essays, referring to graphic organizers and/or annotations.
Groups shared their analysis essays with one another, giving and receiving feedback on how well it accomplished the task.

COLLECTED one essay, from today or yesterday, to return with an AP score and a homework grade tomorrow.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY,  October 21: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

HOMEWORK for Friday, October 21

Remember, final draft essays are due by midnight!  RE-SHARE your essay with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs!

Read the three essays "Close Encounters with US Immigration" (570), "The FBI Is Reading over Your Shoulder" (579) and "How the USA Patriot Act Defends Democracy" (585) in your Bedford Reader.
Also:

  • Annotate each essay with Post-it notes and/or complete a graphic organizer.
  • Choose one essay.  In 40 minutes, write an essay in which you analyze the rhetorical strategies the author uses to develop their position and/or support their purpose for the  essay.


REMEMBER:


FRIDAY,  October 21: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

Wednesday, October 19, 2016

Wednesday, October 19

Reviewed the homework due tomorrow: reading three assigned essays and creating annotations for them via Post-It notes or graphic organizers, AND writing one 40 minute analysis essay for one of the three essays.

Groups met to share observations from last night's essays, referring to graphic organizers and/or annotations.
Groups shared their analysis essays with one another, giving and receiving feedback on how well it accomplished the task.

DUE DATES

FRIDAY,  October 21: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

Tuesday, October 18, 2016

HOMEWORK for Thursday, October 20

Read each of the following three essays, in your Bedford Reader textbook:
  • "Fish Cheeks" (94)
  • "Why I Stopped Being a Vegetarian" (546)
  • "A Vegetarian Philosophy" (552)

Also:

  • Annotate each essay with Post-it notes and/or complete a graphic organizer.
  • Choose one essay.  In 40 minutes, write an essay in which you analyze the rhetorical strategies the author uses to develop their position and/or support their purpose for the  essay.


REMEMBER:

FRIDAY,  October 21: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

Tuesday, October 18

Short class due to early release schedule.

Reviewed the homework due tomorrow: reading three assigned essays and creating annotations for them via Post-It notes or graphic organizers, AND writing one 40 minute analysis essay for one of the three essays.  Some, but not all, of the nightly essays will be scored and graded, and one will be revised for a major essay grade for this class.

Glossary of Style Elements vocabulary quiz.
Analysis of a visual text: viewed and discussed the New Yorker cover, "Shift."

DUE DATES
TUESDAY, October 18: Glossary of Style Elements vocabulary quiz
FRIDAY,  October 21: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

Monday, October 17, 2016

Monday, October 17

Assigned the first wave of what will be nightly homework: reading three assigned essays and creating annotations for them via Post-It notes or graphic organizers, AND writing one 40 minute analysis essay for one of the three essays.  Some, but not all, of the nightly essays will be scored and graded, and one will be revised for a major essay grade for this class.

Groups wrapped up discussion of the two model AP analyses of Hazlitt; whole class discussed relative strengths of the models.

DUE DATES
TUESDAY, October 18: Glossary of Style Elements vocabulary quiz
FRIDAY,  October 21: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

HOMEWORK for Wednesday, October 19

Read each of the following three essays, in your Bedford Reader textbook:

  • "On Compassion" (195)
  • "Homeless" (200)
  • "Pride" (503)

Also:

  • Annotate each essay with Post-it notes and/or complete a graphic organizer.
  • Choose one essay.  In 40 minutes, write an essay in which you analyze the rhetorical strategies the author uses to develop their position and/or support their purpose for the  essay.


REMEMBER:
TUESDAY, October 18: Glossary of Style Elements vocabulary quiz
FRIDAY,  October 20: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

Friday, October 14, 2016

Friday, October 14

Wrapped up discussion of the essay "On Laziness," paying particular attention to the questions:
  • What effect is the author trying to create through his style?
  • How does he create that effect? (Looking especially at syntax, diction, and imagery.)
  • How does that effect serve the purpose of his writing?
Briefly discussed the archaic essay by Hazlitt, "On the Want of Money," paying particular attention to difficult vocabulary and to overall tone.

Groups shared their observations from their notes on Hazlitt.
Distributed two model AP analyses of Hazlitt; groups read them together and discussed strengths they observed in the student essays.

DUE DATES
TUESDAY, October 18: Glossary of Style Elements vocabulary quiz
FRIDAY,  October 20: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

Thursday, October 13

Assigned homework for Friday, October 14, Hazlitt essay.

Wrapped up discussion of tone, tone policing, purpose and audience in writing.
Introduced new Glossary of Style Elements vocabulary unit; quiz Tuesday, October 18!

Groups finished discussion of Winston Churchill's speech, "Blood, Toil, Tears and Sweat," and shared paragraphs and observations with the class as a whole.
Class began discussion of the essay "On Laziness," paying particular attention to the questions:

  • What effect is the author trying to create through his style?
  • How does he create that effect? (Looking especially at syntax, diction, and imagery.)
  • How does that effect serve the purpose of his writing?
Distributed archaic essay by Hazlitt, "On Money."

DUE DATES
TUESDAY, October 18: Glossary of Style Elements vocabulary quiz
FRIDAY,  October 20: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

HOMEWORK for Friday, October 14

Read and annotate and/or create a graphic organizer for Hazlitt essay.  Be sure to identify unfamiliar words or confusing passages!

Wednesday, October 12, 2016

Wednesday, October 12

Homework check: paragraphs from yesterday's homework.
Assigned homework for tomorrow, Thursday, October 12.

Wrapped up discussion of tone, tone policing, purpose and audience in writing.
Introduced new Glossary of Style Elements vocabulary unit; quiz Tuesday, October 18!

Groups met, read through and discussed Winston Churchill's speech, "Blood, Toil, Tears and Sweat," considering purpose, audience, tone, and the specific language and rhetorical strategies Churchill uses here.
Group members began sharing their paragraphs; groups will report on their observations and share their favorite of the paragraphs with the whole class tomorrow.

DUE DATES
TUESDAY, October 18: Glossary of Style Elements vocabulary quiz
FRIDAY,  October 20: Final drafts of reflective essays/Common App essay due.  (Re-share with Ms. Bishop via Google Docs by midnight.)  THIS IS A CHANGE.

HOMEWORK for Thursday, October 13

Read in your packet from "Talking with the Text"(44) through page 68.
Annotate and/or use a graphic organizer with a close reading of the essay, "On Laziness."

Tuesday, October 11, 2016

Tuesday, October 11

Assigned homework for tomorrow, Wednesday, October 12.

Discussed the purpose in "The Myth of Tone Policing" and considered it's probably message: while dismissing an argument based on its tone is a mistake, so is refusing to debate a point at all based on the emotional impact of the subject matter.  (Do we agree? Disagree?  Are some subjects not open to debate?)

Read the essay "Activism: You're Not Doing It Wrong," and considered its tone, its intended message, and its intended audience.

Discussed the relationship between the tone of a piece, the intended audience for a piece, and its purpose.

HOMEWORK for Wednesday, October 12

Read Chapter 2 of your handout packet, pages 39--44.
WRITE UP ONE PARAGRAPH of analysis of "Blood, Toil, Tears, and Sweat."

MONDAY, OCTOBER 17: FINAL DRAFT of the personal reflection/Common App essay is due.

Friday, October 7, 2016

Friday, October 7

"The Myth of Tone Policing" vocabulary quiz.

Returned scored responses to the Chapter One Culminating Activity.
Discussed message and tone in the moon landing texts, and specific language, details, and imagery that provide support for our ideas.


Thursday, October 6, 2016

Thursday, October 6

Students noted their ideas about purpose and "The Myth of Tone Policing," and set them aside.
Students wrote in response to the Chapter One Culminating Activity from their handouts.

COLLECTED Culminating Activity analysis essays for an AP-style score.

DUE DATES
Friday, October 7: "The Myth of Tone Policing" Vocabulary Quiz.

Wednesday, October 5, 2016

Wednesday, October 5

Assigned homework for Thursday: finish reading Chapter One in the handout, reading the last selections carefully.  Come prepared to write!

Checked in about vocabulary we generated from the yesterday's essay, "The Myth of Tone Policing," and distributed a Quizlet list for Friday.

Groups shared their annotations and discussed
  • Significant-seeming information on Speaker, Occasion/Context, or Audience
  • Suggestions of tone
  • Rhetorical appeals (to authority/character, reason, or emotion)
  • Likely PURPOSE of the work.
Whole class discussion, analyzing the essay together.

DUE DATES
Friday, October 7: "The Myth of Tone Policing" Vocabulary Quiz.






HOMEWORK for Thursday, October 6


Finish reading Chapter 1, "An Introduction to Rhetoric," in your handout.
Come to class prepared to write!




Tuesday, October 4, 2016

Tuesday, October 4

Discussion of ideas in yesterday's homework: how tone and appeals to authority/character, reason, and emotion applied to the texts in the reading.
Discussion of visual texts as argument.  Shared simplified version of the SOAPStone organizer.

Read and annotated the essay, "The Myth of Tone Policing," looking for

  • Unfamiliar vocabulary
  • Significant-seeming information on Speaker, Occasion, or Audience
  • Suggestions of tone
  • Rhetorical appeals (to authority/character, reason, or emotion)
Whole class shared challenging vocabulary; groups discussed probable meanings for the words we identified.

Groups will continue with a discussion of their other annotations and observations tomorrow.

DUE DATES
Friday, October 7: "The Myth of Tone Policing" Vocabulary Quiz.





Monday, October 3, 2016

Monday, October 3

Assigned tomorrow's homework.
Wrapped up discussion of tone in  Jamaica Kincaid's essay, "The Ugly Tourist."

Read and discussed the comic strip "No, We Won't Calm Down" by Robot Hugs at the Everyday Feminism blog; considered SOAPS/tone as they apply to this essay in comic strip form.

Students took notes on the rhetorical appeals, Ethos, Logos, and Pathos, and how they relate to other elements of rhetorical analysis.




HOMEWORK For Tuesday, October 4

Read pages 7--29 in your Language of Composition handout.

Friday, September 30, 2016

Friday, September 30

20 minutes of Writers' Workshop: drafts are due for a grade by Friday midnight.

Groups wrapped up discussions analyzing President Bush's 9/11 speech for tone; discussed with the whole class.

Began discussing Jamaica Kincaid's essay, "The Ugly Tourist" using the SOAPStone organizer to focus our thoughts. (We will wrap up our discussion on Monday.)


HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Word Power 3&4 and Introduction to Rhetoric vocabulary Quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Rough draft of the Common App/memoir essay due for a grade from Ms. Bishop.




Thursday, September 29, 2016

Thursday, September 29

Homework check (SOAPS note on Bush's 9/11 speech).
20 minutes of Writers' Workshop: drafts are due for a grade by Friday midnight.

Discussed SOAPS observations, and supporting passages from the speech.
Distributed handout on Tone.
Groups began reviewing the 9/11 speech and discussing tone and the passages which establish it.

Assigned homework for Friday: Read and annotate Jamaica Kincaid's essay, "The Ugly Tourist" and complete a SOAPStone organizer on the essay.


HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Word Power 3&4 and Introduction to Rhetoric vocabulary Quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Rough draft of the Common App/memoir essay due for a grade from Ms. Bishop.




Wednesday, September 28, 2016

HOMEWORK for FRIDAY, September 30

  • Read Jamaica Kincaid's essay "The Ugly Tourist." Annotate for SOAPStone.
  • Consider for Discussion and Writing Question 2.
  • Complete a SOAPStone organizer for the essay--do be selective: Focus more on interesting/important considerations than on less interesting aspects of the analysis.
  • QUESTIONS TO PONDER: Why did Kincaid choose to write this piece in this particular tone?  How does it relate to her purpose in writing it?

Wednesday, September 28

Short class due to Club Day schedule.

Distributed Language of Composition packets and assigned homework for tomorrow.
Reviewed the convention for titles before sharing with me next week:

  • Save as Lastname Memoir (or something similar).
  • Reminder: Use MLA formatting (double space, your name in the upper right corner of the page, and a plain 12 point font) and post word counts before sharing the completed rough draft with me next Friday.

Continued work on rough drafts, due for a grade by Friday midnight.

HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Word Power 3&4 and Introduction to Rhetoric vocabulary Quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Rough draft of the Common App/memoir essay due for a grade from Ms. Bishop.




HOMEWORK for Thursday, September 29

  • In The Language of Composition packet, read through the activity on pages 6--7.
  • Using the SOAPS graphic organizer, analyze George W. Bush's 9/11 speech.
  • Read 527--528 in The Bedford Reader, "Focus on Tone."

Tuesday, September 27

Checked in regarding writers' groups.
Discussed the revision and editing guidelines in The Bedford Reader from last night's homework.

Continued work on rough drafts, including revision and editing.

HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Word Power 3&4 and Introduction to Rhetoric vocabulary Quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Rough draft of the Common App/memoir essay due for a grade from Ms. Bishop.




Monday, September 26, 2016

Monday, September 26

Writers' groups finish sharing and discussing drafts of their reflective essays.
Continue work on rough drafts, beginning revision and editing as students are ready.

HOMEWORK

TUESDAY, SEPTEMBER 27: Read Chapter 2 of The Bedford Reader (31--47).  
(Understand but don't obsess over methods of development.  Pay close attention to section on revision.)
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Word Power 3&4 and Introduction to Rhetoric vocabulary Quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Rough draft of the Common App/memoir essay due for a grade from Ms. Bishop.




Friday, September 23, 2016

Friday, September 23

Vocabulary quiz.
Introduced new vocabulary words on Quizlet--a double set this time--and took orders for packets to assist in study for those who found it helpful.

Writers' groups began sharing and discussing drafts of their reflective essays.

HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Word Power 3&4 and Introduction to Rhetoric vocabulary Quiz.


FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Rough draft of the Common App/personal memoir essay is due for a grade from Ms. Bishop!

Thursday, September 22, 2016

Thursday, September 22

Continued drafting essays.
Students shared their drafts with other members of their writing groups via Google Docs.

HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 23: Word Power vocabulary Quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Rough draft of the Common App/personal memoir essay is due for a grade from Ms. Bishop!

Wednesday, September 21

Continued drafting essays.

HOMEWORK

THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 22: (tentatively) Be ready to share your drafts with the other members of your small writing group via Google Docs!

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 23: Word Power vocabulary Quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Rough draft of the Common App/personal memoir essay is due for a grade from Ms. Bishop!

Monday, September 19, 2016

Tuesday, September 20

Short class due to early release day schedule + picture day.
This class taught by a sub in Ms. Bishop's absence.
Continued drafting essays.

HOMEWORK

THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 22: (tentatively) Be ready to share your drafts with the other members of your small writing group via Google Docs!

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 23: Word Power vocabulary Quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Rough draft of the Common App/personal memoir essay is due for a grade from Ms. Bishop!

Monday, September 19

Groups shared emails for sharing their Google Doc essays with one another by the end of the block on Thursday.
Continued brainstorming and drafting essays.

HOMEWORK

THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 22: (tentatively) Be ready to share your drafts with the other members of your small writing group via Google Docs!

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 23: Word Power vocabulary Quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Rough draft of the Common App/personal memoir essay is due for a grade from Ms. Bishop!

Friday, September 16, 2016

Friday, September 16

Bedford Reader Chapter 1 vocabulary quiz.
Continued brainstorming and drafting essays.

HOMEWORK

THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 22: (tentatively) Be ready to share your drafts with the other members of your small writing group via Google Docs!


FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 23: Word Power vocabulary Quiz.


FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 30: Rough draft of the Common App/personal memoir essay is due for a grade from Ms. Bishop!

Thursday, September 15, 2016

Thursday, September 15

Guidance visit to discuss the college application process, including (for juniors) when to take the PSAT and SAT tests, and (for seniors) an introduction to the Common App and resources and workshops to help with the college application and financial aid application process.

HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 16: Bedford Reader Chapter 1 vocabulary quiz.
THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 22: (tentatively) Be ready to share your drafts with the other members of your small writing group via Google Docs!
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 23: Word Power vocabulary Quiz.


Wednesday, September 14, 2016

Wednesday, September 14

Distributed self-study materials to supplement the Quizlet vocabulary material for Word Power.
Reminder: Bedford Reader quiz this Friday, Word Power 1 and 2 quiz next Friday, September 23.

Explained expectations for Writers' Workshop
Continued brainstorming and drafting essays.

HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 16: Bedford Reader Chapter 1 vocabulary quiz.
THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 22: (tentatively) Be ready to share your drafts with the other members of your small writing group via Google Docs!
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 23: Word Power vocabulary Quiz.


Tuesday, September 13, 2016

Tuesday, September 13

Discussed what prompts each sample essay may have been responding to.
Began brainstorming and drafting essays.

HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 16: Bedford Reader Chapter 1 vocabulary quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 23: Word Power vocabulary Quiz.


Monday, September 12, 2016

Monday, September 12

Groups read and annotated three successful student essays, taking notes on what worked especially well.
Considered what prompts each essay may have been responding to.
Read the admissions' office response to each essay.
Began reporting to the class as a whole.

We will begin brainstorming and drafting tomorrow.

HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 16: Bedford Reader Chapter 1 vocabulary quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 23: Word Power vocabulary Quiz.


Friday, September 9, 2016

Friday, September 9

Discussed the Common Application essay questions and length requirements.
Read and annotated the successful student essay, "Growing Strawberries in a Locker."
Discussed its diction, imagery, use of detail and contrast, as well as strategies used to communicate both the student's talent and that he is not self-absorbed or boastful.

Introduced a 1-2-3 formula for drafting a short, anecdotal memoir:
  • Begin with a memory: In media res with sensory detail... OR begin with a surprise.
  • Flashback for context
  • Wrap up with meaning/link to the prompt. (Tie to title or opening?  A twist at the end?)

HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 16: Bedford Reader Chapter 1 vocabulary quiz.
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 23: Word Power vocabulary Quiz.


Thursday, September 8, 2016

Thursday, September 8

Introduced Bedford Reader Chapter 1 vocabulary on Quizlet, discussed role of Quizlet and vocabulary work in this course.

Discussion of analysis of visual texts for the AP.

Introduced the Rhetorical triangle (Speaker/Audience/Subject) and discussed how it applies to Mairs' essay "On Disability."
Discussion of audience: how our own writing is changed by considerations of audience, how to find out more about the intended audience of a published work.

Introduced the Common Application essay and began considering its audience.


HOMEWORK

FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 16: Bedford Reader Chapter 1 vocabulary quiz.

Wednesday, September 7

Homework check.

Wrapped up our discussion of the common attributes of the best and the worst AP essays.

Discussed passages and observations from the response journals on Mairs' essay "On Disability."
COLLECTED response journals.


HOMEWORK

THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 8: Finish reading Chapter 1 from page 15.

Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Tuesday, September 6

Small writers' groups completed their discussion and scoring of sample AP essay, then compiled a list of the common attributes of the best essays and the worst essays.
Distributed official scores, began reporting to the class on the groups' work.

Signed out copies of The Bedford Reader and assigned homework for tonight.

HOMEWORK

WEDNESDAY, SEPTEMBER 7: Read Chapter 1 through page 15 (the end of Mairs' essay).
Using a response-journal format, record two passages from the essay and respond to it.  Focus on language and/or imagery that provokes, surprises, engages, or puzzles you: be specific about the language/imagery and its effects on you as a reader.

Friday, September 2

Assigned small writers' groups.
Distributed sample AP essays; groups met to read them and to discuss and score them, then compile a list of the common attributes of the best essays and the worst essays.

HOMEWORK

All students are STRONGLY urged to bring a 3 ring binder to class daily.

Friday, September 2, 2016

Thursday, September 1

Book groups wrapped up discussions of summer reading books and presented reports to the class.
COLLECTED summer reading journals.
Returned scored essays on the summer reading; discussed the role of AP scoring vs. graded writing in this course.

HOMEWORK

All students are STRONGLY urged to bring a 3 ring binder to class daily.

Wednesday, August 31, 2016

Wednesday, August 31

Distributed course syllabus, discussed goals and strategies for the course overall.
Shared the class blog.
Book groups formed to discuss summer reading books; students shared 1--2 entries from their journals, discussed their impressions of the central message of the book.  (Will need to report to the class after wrapping up the discussion tomorrow; I will collect the journals then.)

HOMEWORK
Students should remember to bring their summer reading books and their journals again tomorrow for use in class.

All students are STRONGLY urged to bring a 3 ring binder to class daily.

Tuesday, August 30, 2016

Tuesday, August 30

COLLECTED published newspaper clippings of letters to the editor.

Referring to their response journals and to their summer reading books, students wrote a timed, in-class essay on the theme of their book.

COLLECTED finished essays for a score.

HOMEWORK
Students should remember to bring their summer reading books and their journals again tomorrow for use in class.

All students are STRONGLY urged to bring a 3 ring binder to class daily.

Friday, August 19, 2016

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Thursday, June 9, 2016

Summer Reading and Writing Homework: Bring with Book to Class on First Day!


Dear Future AP Composition Student,

Welcome! I'm looking forward to being your teacher next year for the AP writing course, Language and Composition. This letter gives you a brief description of your summer reading and writing work to prepare you for my class—and to make sure that it is really the right class for you. In Language and Composition, you can expect to read a lot of non-fiction, and to write, and write, and write some more! (If that does not sound like the course you wanted, you may want to sign up for English III or English IV instead.)

Here is a brief description of the work you should do for me before fall:

  1. Read any one of the titles on the summer reading list (on the back). As you read, please keep a Double Entry Journal on what you read, either by hand or on a computer. Write one entry every 30—50 pages or so. You don't have to be exact on your page counts, but you should finish with at least five journal entries, fairly evenly spaced out, by the end of the book.
You should bring BOTH the book AND the journal—printed out—to class on the first day, as you'll be using them to help you with a graded writing assignment that day.
  1. Write a letter to the editor of the local paper. To do this, read over a few issues of your local paper and see what you find there. Is there an issue you would like to bring up? Great: write 300—500 words and share your thoughts. Otherwise, pick an editorial you find in the paper and write a response to it.
    Mail one copy of your letter to your paper and another to me, at the school (Gateway Regional High School, 12 Litttleville Rd., Huntington, MA 01050). Please include a copy of the editorial you are responding to if that's what you've done. If your letter is published in the paper, you will receive an A on this assignment. If you simply write the letter, you will receive a B. If you bring a printed copy of the published paper to school on the first day, you will receive an A+!
    Hint: you are much more likely to be published if you aim at a small-circulation local paper. YOU SHOULD COMPLETE THIS ASSIGNMENT DURING THE SUMMER.

If this seems like more work than you want to do this summer, perhaps this isn't actually the class for you.

Questions? You can reach me by email, at cbishop@grsd.org.

Sincerely,

Cat Bishop
Gateway English Department

READING LIST
Choose one of the following.
  • Beavan, Colin. No Impact Man: The Adventures of a Guilty Liberal Who Attempts to Save the Planet, and the Discoveries He Makes about Himself in the Process.
  • Corwin, Miles. And Still We Rise: The Trials and Triumphs of Twelve Gifted Inner-City Students.
  • Ehrenrich, Barbara. Nickel and Dimed: On (Not) Getting by in America.
  • Gill, Michael Gates. How Starbucks Saved My Life: A Son of Privilege Learns to Live like Everyone Else.
  • Krakauer, John. Into the Wild.
  • Pollan, Michael. The Omnivore's Dilemma: A Natural History of Four Meals.
  • Walls, Jeannette. The Glass Castle: A Memoir.
DOUBLE ENTRY JOURNALS
As you read, keep a reading journal on your book. You may write these journals by hand or on a computer, but they must be printed by the first day of class. These journals will consist of quotations to which you respond critically for each work.

Select one quotation or passage for approximately every 50 pages or so. You should have at least five by the time you're done. Responses should be developed paragraphs, not just a scrawled sentence or two—and don't simply restate what the writer is saying. Think about it, and comment thoughtfully.
Entries should look something like this:


Quote Response
Write the quote from the book on the left side of the paper with the correct MLA citation” (Author 176).
In other words, follow each quote with the name of the author and the page number of the quote.






Your response and analysis of the quote should be written on the opposite side of the page.
For the response column, you have several ways to respond to a text and you only need to use one way. You might:
  • Raise questions about the beliefs and values implied in the text.
  • Give your personal reactions to the passage.
  • Discuss the words, ideas, or actions of the author or a character.
  • Tell what it reminds you of from your own experiences or from current events, etc.
  • Write about what it makes you think or feel.
  • Argue with or speak to the character or author.